Mickys Wedge surpreme deluxe!

 Hey readers, For the past couple of weeks in writing we have been doing instruct writing. I found instruct writing really fun and kinda tricky but then easy. Miss Mcleod (Best Writing Teacher) gave us the task to create our own burger and name and then instruct you guys how to make it. Have you done instruct writing before? Here Is my advertisement!

And if you scroll down even more you can have a look on how to make it

Song writing

 Hey everyone for the past couple of weeks we have been doing song writing. I came up with a song about South Hornby School. Sadly I couldn't come up with a melody. It was a bit hard at first but then I got the hang of it. Here is my song.

Te Manu TukuTuku

 At south hornby school the teachers are super cool. 

We stand here tall and proud on Amyes rd

 to learn and grow. 

We have people powers like no other schools, 

“South hornby yeah”

“South hornby yeah”

“I like South hornby.. 

 Every single person in our school is amazingly cool 

“South hornby yeah”

“South hornby yeah”

Pūnui-o- toka is the best 

we are the kaitiaki of the rest!! “Wooah” 

We have our classrooms from naught to six

We all like to show our tricks “Our triicks”

We have a special rock because we are the coolest on the block

“South hornby yeah”

“South hornby yeah”

“I like South hornby.. 

 Every single person in our school is amazingly cool 

“South hornby yeah”

“South hornby yeah”

Sometimes we can be crazy but

South hornby school is your number 1 “woah”

Metaphors

 Today we did metaphors and it was easy as. What was fun was picking our sentences. What was hard was nothing actually. Do you know what a metaphor is?

                        

Moment in time

Last week we finished a piece of writing which was a moment in time practising for our writing test. It was a man which we called abseiler climbing a wall of big black rocks It was fun because i had a lot of good words for it. What was challenging was doing feel. what was fun was just putting a whole bunch of words in my writing and making it in to a moment in time.

Im going to show you my writing. here it is. Bye hope you like it remember to comment!!

 

Victorian dolls To inform

For the past 2 weeks we have been working on Information reports I picked Victorian dolls A Information report is when you inform someone about a particular topic. We had to pick a toy from back in the day. So first we started of with doing our introduction then paragraph one (appearance) then paragraph 2 (who were they made for?) after paragraph 3 (Dolls now). And finally Our conclusion yay I finished!! So here have a look at mine.

We had to make sure we had:

Technical words

punctuation

Rhetorical question

And facts about the topic

                         

     

Writing from lockdown

Hello mikayla mandarins today I am showing you a piece of writing from boring lockdown but now where back at school yay!!! so this is my writing.

                        

Fun funny writing this term (D.L.O)

                              Hi, im Mikayla

And today I am telling you about all the writing we have been doing for our warm ups. So everytime we go to writing we go on our chromebooks and go to our slides. Some can be really funny and intersesting. But the point is about this is to get better at writing. Here are the slides.

Pick -a -path

For the past couple of weeks we have been working on a pick a path story we  made up mines about a dragon getting lost in the Hogwarts lava castle. Don't worry all the pictures are public domain they haven't been copyright. Here is my pick a path story all you need to do is read then click on an option:).

Sore (writing)

Today for writing we write about a video clip which was about when this girl crashed her plane then along came a min iture boy called Hayden which crashed his plane to so here is the video clip if you want to write about it to.

Link
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eDkpVwrhYfo

And here is my writing

“Shshshshsh wooop” as the plane came crashing down with cold air, Lucy saw that her plane had broken down. She was upset until a miniature boy fell off his plane because he had to grab his little black stripy bag.

One sunny but windy day there was a girl about 10 or 11 she was trying to get her plane to soar in the air but it kept breaking. Then along came a boy who had crashed his plane. His name was Hayden. She was like “hello”, the boy was a bit scared.

The problem was that Lucy couldn't get her aeroplane because it was too far away but Hayden's plane was just broken and she felt bad for him. So even though hers was really far away she ran over there and grabbed it and  ran back.

The girl helped the miniature boy to fix his flying machine by using parts of her plane.  

He got to rejoin his community to fly to space and he put a beautiful star into the sky.

Lighthouse writing

Today we did some lighthouse writing I finished so now I can share it with you guys. What was fun was writing about a video clip I will put the link down here. What your favourite subject at school? Here is my writing and the video clip is down here.

Video link:https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_continue=1&v=6HfBbSUORvo&feature=emb_logo
Drip,drop. The old wrinkled lighthouse keeper could hear the rain against the foggy windows as he filled in his journal. Once at about 10pm there was a big “bang” and the light blew out and he dropped some glass. Drip,drop. The old wrinkled lighthouse keeper could hear the rain against the foggy windows as he filled in his journal. Once at about 10pm there was a big “bang” and the light blew out and he dropped some glass. The lighthouse keeper is about in his 30s to 40s he is a lonely old man. A while later a ship was coming towards the lighthouse and the light went out. “OMG” the man was freaking out. He didn't know what to do. Luckily all the town people came into the tower and used their lamps to guide the ship. They saved the day.

BYE!! 

Catch it (writing)

Hi readers,
Today for writing we did a hangout which was themed funny joke day so   it was a really funny hangout session I can tell you 2 jokes that  I did.

1. why should we tell actors to break a leg?
because everyday has a cast on it. haha

2.Today at the bank an old lady told me to check her balance.?
So I pushed her over.

Anyways we also finished our catch it writing it was fun because we also watched the video. Here is the link for the video if you want to write about it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c88QE6yGhfM. so there that is and here is my writing

As the sun rose up in a hot desert the family of brown and white meerkats walked outside followed by many others. They saw something strange dangling from a brown branch,it was a pink juicy fruit!! So they hoped out of there little cave under ground and went over.

Once a naughty vulture came and stole the dragon fruit.The meerkats got angry and started chasing him all round the place that they even made a long line holding on to each other's feet. 

A little later the meerkats were still holding onto the vultures feet and were determined to get that fruit!. But then the vulture crashed into the side of a cliff and the fruit rolled out of its feet. And then the meerkats threw it to each other but at the end the fruit splattered on the ground.

And no one got the fruit in the end.  

here are some pictures

Teeth

Hi guys,today for writing I finished my narative called teeth. We watched a video and then wrote a plan and then started writing our introduction. Here are some photos.

How many teeth do you have now and how many teeth have you lost?? =)  here is the video to 

https://www.literacyshed.com/teeth.html

the video link here

And my writing here

 Bye you should try writing a narrative about this video to

         

Pigeon Impossible

Today for writing I finished my secret agent writing here it is.
                        

Once in washington DC in America lived an annoying pigeon and a secret agent who wore dark bold black clothes and shady sunglasses. One day the man felt hungry and decided to grab out his bagel but then DUN DUN DUN he met a pigeon that had wanted to steal his bagel. Then he wiggled and fell into the briefcase and got traped. While the pigeon was in the briefcase he started pressing big colourful buttons that cause stuff to happen like BAD STUFF. But most of all the red button the red button launches the rocket ship. The pigeon press the green button that starts shooting stuff nearly people in the head but then blowing up cars it was going crazy. The man went up to the rocket ship and tries to save it but ¨boom¨ it blew up the man came crashing down in slow motion.

Home learning writing story scrambler

Today I have done some story scrambler writing. Story scrambler is when they pick what you write about it is really fun. So they told me to write about a police officer that ride a comet.

Here is my writing.

Mr Indifferent

Today in Miss Jones writing group we have wrote a story about Mr Indifferent he is a man who lives in the city and always has his hands in his pockets here is mine.

Goldilocks writing

Four the past couple of weeks we have been doing a short recount of goldilocks and the three bears what was challenging was trying not to make it into a story what was easy was describing her and what she liked to do. Here is my writing hope you like it. oh and have you ever made a piece of writing of goldilocks?

In the middle of the spooky woods is a old little cottage where goldilocks lives with her dear mother.

Goldilocks has blonde beautiful cascading curls that shimmer with her blue navy eyes. Goldilocks has a blue dress with a white apron and looks about ten years old.

Goldilocks is naughty and is disrespectful. Her dear mother usually thinks of her as a helpful person but little does she know what she has done. 

When she is in the forest she likes to pat the bunnies, watch the butterflies and pick different coloured flowers.

She went into someones house, broke someones chair, ate porridge and slept in someone's bed that is very naughty.

Goldilocks is very guilty for not listening to her mum by going to far in the woods.

six sentence story

Today in Miss Jones writing class we have been doing some six sentence storys a six sentence story is when you do six sentences but of a story. I did mine of a furious dragon here take a look.

Thanks for reading bye

You should learn to swim

This week we have been doing more persuasive writing mine was about why you should learn to swim. we had to use the persuasive writing criteria here is my writing.
                 

                 

leap frog

In writing this week we have been given a book to retell we could make it a story a or a moment in time this week we have written about a book called leap frog i choose to write about a moment in time. 

crusaders game

On the second week of the holidays me, my brother Tyson, Dad, Georgia and my best friend Bailee went to the stadium to watch the best rugby teams in the world the Crusaders vs Lions. First we had some delicious dinner, we had nachos. Next we drove to the Crusaders game and met aunty Brandi, Cody and auntys boyfriend at gate A. Then we had to wait patiently to scan our tickets.Next we got a ginormous crusaders flag.Then we walked up lots of stairs my legs were getting tired. We tried to find our seats we sat down and a guy said if the ball comes out into the crowd and we catch it we get a bag of free delicious sausages. Finally the game started guess what the crusaders got the first try that was a win win for us. The whistle blew very loud because it was half time I was hungry and thirsty  so dad went and got a fanta for Me and Georgia,lmp for Bailee and coke for tyson and we also got scrumptious hot chips for all of us yummy. It was amazing because they got a heap of trys the post lit up bright red it nearly blinded me and fire bursted out of a cannon I waved my flag up high. Although the game finished. We waved our flag one more time before the whistle blew and can you guess what The crusaders won! Then it was time to go home my favourite part of the night was hagging out with my family and seeing the crusaders win it was really fun