Here is my writing.
Tuesday, March 24, 2020
Home learning writing story scrambler
Today I have done some story scrambler writing. Story scrambler is when they pick what you write about it is really fun. So they told me to write about a police officer that ride a comet.
Here is my writing.
Here is my writing.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey Mikayla,
ReplyDeleteAwesome job for keeping up with your home learning. Unfortunately, I found it really hard to read as your writing goes over the page of the blog. Any chance that you can fix it up and leave me a comment so that I can come back and re-read it?
-Miss Morgan
Okay I dont know how to fix it sorry do you?
DeleteNext time you are working in a doc and transferring it to your blog there are two options:
Delete1. Screenshot it
2. Copy (control c) and then Paste by going control shift v
If you wanted to fix this post up you can do that my using the enter or return button? Or take a sceenshot.
Let me know how you get on!
- Miss Morgan
you already sorted it! AWESOME!
Deleteyeah thanks
DeleteWhat an interesting piece of work. I like the descriptive words you have used and the onomatopoeia from the word boom!
ReplyDeleteI wonder how hot a comet like that would be? Did you do any research on what comet are or what happens when they fall to earth?