Last week we finished a piece of writing which was a moment in time practising for our writing test. It was a man which we called abseiler climbing a wall of big black rocks It was fun because i had a lot of good words for it. What was challenging was doing feel. what was fun was just putting a whole bunch of words in my writing and making it in to a moment in time.
Im going to show you my writing. here it is. Bye hope you like it remember to comment!!
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